tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2126113378990982419.post5473908397889782596..comments2011-12-06T09:55:02.639-08:00Comments on Nausheen Manji's English Language Virtual Class: The Haunting by Iqra KhalidNausheen Manjihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08093578164782148162noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2126113378990982419.post-3452285508751765482011-11-12T07:56:23.117-08:002011-11-12T07:56:23.117-08:00For me, this isnt exactly a short story. She sees ...For me, this isnt exactly a short story. She sees him, she has a small flashback and then she's back where she was and he's not really there. it all happens too fast. also, she goes to the mall with her friends and shes inside, strolling and suddenly she's witnessed her fathers accident on the road? it doesnt come together well. maybe if she came out of the mall, saw her father crossing the road and screamed out "dad" and as he stopped to look at her, a car hit him and she stood frozen? it would all make sense. Right now, it kinda seems like a blur. However, your descriptions are good.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com